Design Research Dissertation | Draft Dissertation

Mohamed Hammam Chebel (0342483) BDE's. Creative Media (Hons). 
Design Research Dissertation. 
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week 2 

- Task 01 not completed 

- refer to the lecture videos and pdf slides posted in Teams 

- Complete task 01 and ask for a consultation 

week3 

- put the phrase "the importance ..." at the beginning.

- describe what is color and how colors work in websites.

- In every topic, you must have a short introduction.

- How design elements appear in websites.

- As the purpose revolves around color ...

- keep culture at the end.

- Added; "color scheme and branding of a website".

- Answer the second question: "How do colors work with other design elements".

- Do some website analysis to help you with 5.2.1>

- Design thinking read about it.

- Complete 5.1 and 5.2 for next week.

week 4

- Put citations in text.

- Put captions below the pictures.

- don't put two pictures as one figure number

- get clearer higher resolution images.

- put desktop screengrabs instead of mobile screen grabs.

- double-check the Call To Action spelling.

- add more images for each key design element.

- get rid of the word app.

- try not to use etc...

- choose "color" or "colour"

- don't use the term "conclude" yet!

- how do colors work with other design elements (images, content)

-  put percentages from the survey

- discuss and argue with a website example.

- try not to write long sentences.

week 5

- Make elements in order.

- redo interview citations, refer to the example provides by the lecturer.

-  paraphrase, don't use the exact words.

-  Don't use "Your" in your dissertation.

- Add a picture credit list for all the images.

- Try to finish the literature review for next week.

- refer to the recorder tutorial videos to get a better understanding.

week 6

- add two more articles 

- make sure the articles are recent

- try to reach 750 words

- Follow the structure of the dissertation