Design Research Dissertation | Research for Publication
Mohamed Hammam Chebel (0342483) BDE's. Creative Media (Hons).
Design Research Dissertation.
Design Research Dissertation.
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Research for publication Final
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week 13
- please show me your progress in the actual template on Week 14.
- In the introduction here, is different from the one you had written for the dissertation. Here, give an introduction about the topic - the importance of colors in web design for user experience. Use research to support as well.
- Bracket the whole citation in the problem statement.
- No need to capitalize this letter.
- No need to use upper case.
- Explain in paragraph two why there were Algerians as your participants.
- Indicate that the sample of the questionnaire is found in Appendix I.
- Give a short bio of who those interviewees HERE, before the following paragraph.
- Petchara responded via ..., while Kaewmanee responded through...
- Start by indicating the number of responses. in the online survey section.
- Write in the third person throughout the article.
- You need to mention him in research methods (interviewees) too. Also, what about the other two interviewees' responses?
- Don't use short forms. "Does not".
- Support this claim with secondary research (citation). [design thinking].
- For these two sentences, support with secondary research.
- Support with research (citation).
week 14
- put Taylors student email address first
- keywords are fine
- maybe you can say user experience (Keywords)
- in this paper the author discusses instead of conducts a research
- that will result in a better user experience
- Be alert on when to use a comma and a full stop
- Call to Action Fig 1, put a strong impactful image there
- Cite all research in paragraphs
- color is one of the most powerful design elements that evoke peoples emotions and moods
- if we take a look around color is everywhere around us
- Use the third person throughout the whole paper
- use & instead of and.
- fig 2 is a very successful website that uses color (suitable use of color reflects brand well and engages user).
- give credits for every picture you use.
- these methods were chosen .. instead of I
- put full stop when necessary
- designed the question in en and fr
- because many Algerians uses fr for com and reading
- mention how did you met Rania Mimoune
- how do you know her
- was translated from en to fr
- try to shorten the sentences
- rename appendix I
- replace this with what the questions are about
- to understand the use of color in web design from a designer's perspective
- not perfect the suitable or the best color palette for a website.
- the first the second the third
- the first interviewee was a freelance graphic designer
- the next interviewee
- mention Thailand when talking about university
- with more than 10 years of experience
- briefly describe what were the interview questions about
- indicate 568 in the paragraph instead of the title
- just put the survey
- the survey garnered 568 in - period of time -
- remove unnecessary commas
- remember full stop is after the bracket in citations.
- to conclude instead of simply.
- use four colors for the book design
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